haiku's again

i’ve gotten pretty damn good at writing haiku’s since the last time i wrote one of these posts. the only part i still struggle with is the whole 5-7-5 syllable thing.


#1 - the town

the town is quiet

soft rain falls over the streets

reflects the pale moon-light


#2 - a shadow

the silhouettes do dances

across the waking forest

bringing a new day now


#4 - the fawn

young, chasing the sound of

distant streams through morning dew

basking in the sun-light


see, its really hard to get that last line down to only 5 syllables.


#5 - ultimate

the final haiku

i wrote for this post

short, sweet, near perfect except that this last line has way to many syllables